I would like comments on what I could do better and what you enjoyed about it.
Hope you enjoyed it.
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Wow Josh outstanding Video, maybe one day this could be in the air New Zealand planes for safety! I really liked the way how you were speaking as well as Chloe doing the actions very clever!! I see you have worked on making your voice clear I remember you telling us that was your goal and I hunk you passed it! It was loud and clear! Also I loved the part when the bear was wearing a mask that was cute!! This is so good it's quite hard to fault I think maybe if you would do it again maybe put your plane in there somewhere maybe flying in the background but awesome work!
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Fantastic video Josh, I am glad you decided to make this to go with your plane. I think Courtney has a made a great point about the clarity of your voice, you have really improved in that area! You worked so hard to successfully complete your project and I am super proud of what you have achieved, I hope you are too!
ReplyDeleteamazing video Josh, I like the way you used all the parts from a real safety video but made them your own. I also liked the way you spoke it was clear and easy to understand, next time in your blog post you could put in a photo of the plane you made.
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