Tuesday, 1 September 2015

Essay planning


Our focus is to respond persuasively to the essay topic "100% pure New Zealand everyday a different journey" -stating and explaining your position. - Gathering facts and giving examples. - Linking back to the statement throughout the essay. - Using persuasive words and phrase and discuss the following elements like historical, geographical, culture, adventure, Natuarl phenomena and any extra. At the moment this is my plan I have found alot of interesting facts! If you would like you can give me some more facts or feed back my favourite fact at the moment is if you want a fullfil a once in a lifetime ambition, over Queenstown promises to leave you gasping with happiness and grinning from ear to ear and do awesome jet boating!  So hopefully I get some comments 

2 comments:

  1. Nice essay planing
    Leon

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  2. Thx Leon maybe you could give me constructive feed back?

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