I chose green because of all the grass,bush and NZ is well known for greenstone.
My next step would be to read it through again to check for spelling mistakes that I've missed and to not miss out words.In between sentences.the part I like about it is the block letter heading and the fern at the bottom.
Nice work Jayden I like your furn at the bottom.why did you write koru beside the koru?i like your title how it's green just like your poem.next time try make everything neater nice work.
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Thanks ben
DeleteI am glad to see you are so pleased with your work Jayden. Next time follow the corrections made on your draft to avoid spelling mistakes. Miss Boatswain
ReplyDeleteWow Jayden not only did you make your your poem rhyme it also looks fantastic I like the fern down the bottom it's very authentic, I'm not sure your writing is in pencil or what but it's quite hard to read but nice stuff Jayden keep it Up
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Yeah I should of zoomed in more when I took the picture but I wanted to see the rest of the paper. Jayden
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