Monday, 13 April 2015

Writing poems with nouns and adjectives By Katie, Nicole, jack, Cameron, Ryan, Jayden, Leon

We saw a picture of a boy in a zorb ball on water. We had to come up with nouns, adjectives and phrases to describe the photo. We visualised that we were there to help us describe. We have been learning about some different types of poems. 

Blue sky, sheltering people
Wavey water leaps up
Blue pool making waves
Hard zip floating smoothly
The bouncy ball rolls on water
Hot days playing through the water
The tall shady trees keep the sun away
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2 comments:

  1. Anonymous28 April 2015 at 14:03

    Nice writing! It is really descriptive piece, I like the way you hooked me in.
    Next step is to make it a bit longer.
    Rowan C, year 8, Toko school.

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  2. Anonymous28 April 2015 at 14:04

    Nice writing! It is really descriptive piece, I like the way you hooked me in.
    Next step is to make it a bit longer.
    Rowan C, year 8, Toko school.

    ReplyDelete

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