Monday, 13 April 2015

Nouns and adjectives by maeve

Waves around,cold but high,blue to see the view. Nice to touch,crowed to see. Waves hair cools me down. Nearly couriers,cool to be a ball.

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  2. Hi Maeve. Good work with this bit of work. Really descriptive language. Good vocabulary. Next Step: Maybe a the proper layout would really help this piece. Molly Lourie, Yr 8 , Toko school.

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