Sunday, 29 March 2015

Nouns, adjectives and phrase. By Emma

round ball in the crystal blue sky,
green trees swishing loud, loud and louder.
pretty clear blue crystally Sky,
ice-cold freezing pool sitting right in front of me
fuzzy hair in the big beach ball,
rainbow colours everywhere.

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  1. Nice writing Emma, it has a lot of great vocabulary and it feels like I was there.
    Next Step: Try to put capitals at the start of your sentences not in the middle.

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