Welcome to the Room 7 blog!! We are excited to share our learning progress with a wider audience. Our work will be a mixture of unfinished, unpublished and completed tasks. Feedback is welcome in the form of two medals (positive), a mission (constructive next step) and a question. Thanks for taking the time to share in our learning.
Really cool piece Alyssa. Love the great descriptive language. The layout is also very good. Next step: Bit more length would be good because it was such a great piece. Molly Lourie, year 8, Toko school.
Awesome poem Alyssa! I like the way you described the scenery and I also like how you described how you felt at the time. Next Steps: Next time you could try and use some more advanced vocabulary But other then that fantastic writing piece. Rowan S, Year 8, Toko School.
Really cool piece Alyssa. Love the great descriptive language. The layout is also very good. Next step: Bit more length would be good because it was such a great piece. Molly Lourie, year 8, Toko school.
ReplyDeleteAwesome poem Alyssa! I like the way you described the scenery and I also like how you described how you felt at the time.
ReplyDeleteNext Steps: Next time you could try and use some more advanced vocabulary But other then that fantastic writing piece.
Rowan S, Year 8, Toko School.