Wednesday, 18 November 2015
leon's attempt at a picture story
In room 7 we have been making visual stories on New Zealand being 100% pure. We did a visual story because we needed to try and represent our written work in a different way and so we know how to use iMovie. So I hope you like my attempt. I think I did a good job. So if you comment on my essay I will be able to use what you said to make another one.
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Leon, it was really well thought out. Everything looked like it fitted in. All of it flowed really flow.Something you could do better next time is try to slow the words down to make them easier to read. Other than that it was a really good effort. By Lucas
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