Monday, 11 May 2015

The war Days, by Courtney


2 comments:

  1. Nice article it looks cool but maybe next time have a little blurb about what it is about.
    Rowan C, Year 8, Toko.

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  2. Hi Courtney, I like how you have presented this and made it look like a news paper article.
    Next Steps:Try to make sure that it makes sense and make sure that there is a full stop at the end.

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